Friday, January 29, 2016


She swallowed the last one; for once, hopeful; hopeful about her journey into the mysterious black-hole of her soul.

My first attempt at one line fiction. I am not sure of the structure or rules. I was too impatient to check. Please let me know what you think!

I initially titled it 'mercy killing' and , as I feel sometimes for a person suicide is really an act of mercy towards themselves. They feel they are punishing themselves by being alive and the only way to escape that bodily punishment is to journey into the black hole that is sucking them in. 

#flashfiction #onelinefiction #depression #suicide


  1. V good dear !! I appreciate your first attempt.
    Try more !!

  2. Too good. You have captured the pain so well.